There are at least three spelling errors, that aside this is an elegant, but lengthy letter. There is a lot of flattery going on, but that seems to be the best way to go sometimes with university admissions tutors, it can pay off to be eloquent with them.
"Lanard's Comments". Thanks for the feedback. I looked for the spelling errors to correct them, but couldn't find any. Also, I agree that it's a little lengthy with a heavy emphasis on flattery, but decided to print it as presented. Glad that you enjoyed and thanks again for the feedback.
Care to take a look at some of the other submissions and make comments? Please do. See ya.
