Fairly Balanced

I think it is not a bad letter. It expresses sincere support for the addressee, while not going too overboard with emotion. However I think it is a little dry and could perhaps benefit from a more personal touch and/or somewhat more emotion. I also feel the language is a bit formal, which doesn't convey sympathy as well in my opinion.

Lanard's Response: Agreed. A thing to remember about templates and sample letters is that they aren't meant to be the final product, but a guide in which to get to where you wan to get a little faster than it would take if you were writing the letter from scratch. So, readers beware - heed the comments above. I believe you'll end up with a better letter because of it. Thanx!

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